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Committee notes to the federal rules of evidence explain what an amendment does. The note to the 2023 amendment of Rule 702 also tells the courts that a body of their case law is wrong, and it begins the point with a contrast. "But many courts have held that the critical questions of the sufficiency of an expert's basis, and the application of the expert's methodology, are questions of weight and not admissibility."1 The sentence that follows settles it. "These rulings are an incorrect application of Rules 702 and 104(a)."1

What the amendment changed

The amendment was adopted on April 24, 2023 and took effect on December 1, 2023.1 An expert may now testify "if the proponent demonstrates to the court that it is more likely than not" that four conditions are met.1 Three of them concern the knowledge, the facts or data, and the principles and methods.1 The fourth is that "the expert's opinion reflects a reliable application of the principles and methods to the facts of the case."1

The committee note explains what the fourth condition is for. "Rule 702(d) has also been amended to emphasize that each expert opinion must stay within the bounds of what can be concluded from a reliable application of the expert's basis and methodology."1 The note then bounds the inquiry from both sides. "Similarly, nothing in the amendment requires the court to nitpick an expert's opinion in order to reach a perfect expression of what the basis and methodology can support."1 It adds that the Rule 104(a) standard "does not require perfection. On the other hand, it does not permit the expert to make claims that are unsupported by the expert's basis and methodology."1

Courts have long described the report as a document

A footnote in a 1998 Seventh Circuit opinion collects the drafting standard. Reports "must not be sketchy, vague or preliminary in nature," the footnote says, citing the Advisory Committee note to Rule 26.2 Citing a district court, it adds that reports "must include 'how' and 'why' the expert reached a particular result, not merely the expert's conclusory opinions."2

A 2022 order in the Eastern District of Washington shows what falls short. Writing about a medical expert, the court found that "Rather than explain the bases and reasoning for his opinions, Dr. McMunn has disclosed one-to-two sentence conclusions."3 The opinions were "vague as the reader must guess" what several of their own terms referred to.3

An order applying the amended rule to an engineer

In March 2026 the District of Oregon excluded the opinions of a metallurgical engineer who had examined a failed nylon pull-strap on a trailer roll-up door. "The Court concludes on this record that plaintiff has not established by a preponderance of the evidence that Marksthaler's opinions are based on adequate facts or data or on a reliable methodology."4 Quoting an earlier decision, the order also describes what a second report may not do. "[A] rebuttal report is not the time to change methodologies to account for noted deficiencies; instead, it is to respond to criticisms of such methodologies."4

The report has a fixed content list, and drafts do not

Federal Rule of Civil Procedure 26(a)(2)(B) requires "a complete statement of all opinions the witness will express and the basis and reasons for them."5 It separately requires "the facts or data considered by the witness in forming them."5 The rule says considered there and relied on elsewhere, and choosing between them is a drafting decision.5

Drafts are treated differently. Rule 26(b)(4)(B) protects "drafts of any report or disclosure required under Rule 26(a)(2), regardless of the form in which the draft is recorded."5 Rule 26(b)(4)(C) protects communications between a party's attorney and a reporting expert, subject to three exceptions.5 How those rules apply to a given engagement is a question for the lawyers on the case.

What an editor works on, and what the engineer keeps

No editor forms an engineering opinion, chooses a method, or decides whether a conclusion follows from an analysis. Those acts belong to the engineer who signs the report, and we neither review them nor adjust them. For engineers licensed in Texas, board rules reach engineering work that does not bear a seal. That work, "including but not limited to research reports, opinions, recommendations, evaluations, addenda, documents produced for litigation," must carry the engineer's printed name, date, signature, and the P.E. designation.6

Everything written around that signature is still text. We check that every opinion stated in a summary also appears in the body, worded the same way, and that the facts and data considered are listed rather than described in general terms. We follow a term from the scope section to the conclusions and report where its meaning shifts, and that a figure in the text matches the figure in the appendix. We check that a qualifier attached to a measurement is still attached in the sentence that relies on it. Client work is confidential, without qualification.

What a report can say is limited by what was recorded earlier. ASTM E1188 covers "the collection and preservation of information and physical items by any technical investigator."7 ASTM E620 says its own practice "establishes those elements of the expert's opinion report which will make the report understandable to the intended recipient."8 The same sentence asks that those elements "focus on the technical aspects germane to the purpose for which the opinion is rendered."8 Under the amended Rule 702, the judge reading that report decides whether the opinion will be heard at all.

References

  1. Legal Information Institute, Cornell Law School, Federal Rules of Evidence, Rule 702, Testimony by Expert Witnesses, with the Committee Notes on Rules, 2023 Amendment. https://www.law.cornell.edu/rules/fre/rule_702 Amendment dates confirmed against Office of the Law Revision Counsel, United States Code, Title 28 Appendix, Rule 702. https://uscode.house.gov/view.xhtml?req=granuleid%3AUSC-prelim-title28a-node232-article7-rule702&num=0&edition=prelim
  2. Salgado v. General Motors Corporation, 150 F.3d 735 (7th Cir. 1998), decided July 23, 1998, footnote 6. Copy consulted: https://law.justia.com/cases/federal/appellate-courts/F3/150/735/571567/
  3. Estate of Cindy Lou Hill v. NaphCare, Inc., No. 2:20-cv-00410-MKD, US District Court for the Eastern District of Washington, order of July 8, 2022. https://www.govinfo.gov/content/pkg/USCOURTS-waed-2_20-cv-00410/pdf/USCOURTS-waed-2_20-cv-00410-3.pdf
  4. Barley v. ArcBest II, Inc., No. 3:22-cv-01921-JR, US District Court for the District of Oregon, opinion and order of March 11, 2026. https://www.govinfo.gov/content/pkg/USCOURTS-ord-3_22-cv-01921/pdf/USCOURTS-ord-3_22-cv-01921-0.pdf
  5. Legal Information Institute, Cornell Law School, Federal Rules of Civil Procedure, Rule 26, Duty to Disclose; General Provisions Governing Discovery. https://www.law.cornell.edu/rules/frcp/rule_26
  6. Texas Administrative Code, Title 22, Part 6, Chapter 137, Subchapter B, Section 137.33, Sealing Procedures, subsection (f)(3). The rule also permits other designations described in Section 137.1. Copy consulted: https://law.cornell.edu/regulations/texas/22-Tex-Admin-Code-SS-137-33
  7. ASTM International, ASTM E1188-23, Standard Practice for Collection and Preservation of Information and Physical Items by a Technical Investigator, approved 2023. https://store.astm.org/e1188-23.html
  8. ASTM International, ASTM E620-18, Standard Practice for Reporting Opinions of Scientific or Technical Experts. https://store.astm.org/e0620-18.html

A worked example: Expert Report Conclusion Section

Retained expert report, Rule 26(a)(2)(B)

A retained expert's report must contain "a complete statement of all opinions the witness will express and the basis and reasons for them." A footnote in a 1998 Seventh Circuit opinion, Salgado v. General Motors, collects the drafting standard from the Advisory Committee note and from a district court decision. Reports "must not be sketchy, vague or preliminary in nature," and they "must include 'how' and 'why' the expert reached a particular result, not merely the expert's conclusory opinions." A 2022 order in the Eastern District of Washington describes the failure exactly. Rather than explain the bases and reasoning, one expert "has disclosed one-to-two sentence conclusions," and the opinions were "vague as the reader must guess" what their own terms referred to. The 2023 amendment to Federal Rule of Evidence 702 made the wording matter more. Its committee note states that "each expert opinion must stay within the bounds of what can be concluded from a reliable application of the expert's basis and methodology." The extract below is reproduced unchanged in both panels. Every fact, figure and section number in the revised conclusions comes from it. No opinion is added, removed, narrowed or reordered.

Before

SPECIMEN, PREPARED BY EDITFAST FOR ILLUSTRATION. NOT A REAL RECORD.
Report of J. Halloran, P.E. - Meridian Forensic Group (fictitious)

EXTRACT FROM EARLIER SECTIONS (reproduced unchanged in both panels)
3.1 Fatigue morphology: beach marks and ratchet marks on a fracture surface.
4.2 Fracture surface at the bolt hole: beach marks and one ratchet mark observed.
4.5 Measured bolt torque as found: 31 foot-pounds.
5.1 Endurance limit used in analysis: 18 ksi.
5.3 Finite element model run at 55 foot-pounds: predicted stress range 14 ksi.
6.2 Installation instructions at Appendix C state a torque of 55 foot-pounds. They state no tightening sequence for the four bolts.

SECTION 7 - CONCLUSIONS

7.1 The bracket failed in fatigue.

7.2 The failure was caused by improper installation.

7.3 Had the bracket been installed correctly, the incident would not have occurred.

7.4 It is my opinion to a reasonable degree of engineering certainty that the manufacturer's instructions were inadequate.

After

SPECIMEN, PREPARED BY EDITFAST FOR ILLUSTRATION. NOT A REAL RECORD.
Report of J. Halloran, P.E. - Meridian Forensic Group (fictitious)

EXTRACT FROM EARLIER SECTIONS (reproduced unchanged in both panels)
3.1 Fatigue morphology: beach marks and ratchet marks on a fracture surface.
4.2 Fracture surface at the bolt hole: beach marks and one ratchet mark observed.
4.5 Measured bolt torque as found: 31 foot-pounds.
5.1 Endurance limit used in analysis: 18 ksi.
5.3 Finite element model run at 55 foot-pounds: predicted stress range 14 ksi.
6.2 Installation instructions at Appendix C state a torque of 55 foot-pounds. They state no tightening sequence for the four bolts.

SECTION 7 - CONCLUSIONS

7.1 The bracket failed in fatigue. Basis: the fracture surface observations at Section 4.2, read against the fatigue morphology at Section 3.1.

7.2 The failure was caused by improper installation. Basis: the as-found torque of 31 foot-pounds at Section 4.5, against the 55 foot-pounds specified in the instructions at Section 6.2.

7.3 Had the bracket been installed correctly, the incident would not have occurred. Basis: the model at Section 5.3, run at 55 foot-pounds, predicts a stress range of 14 ksi against the endurance limit of 18 ksi at Section 5.1.

7.4 It is my opinion that the manufacturer's instructions were inadequate. Basis: Section 6.2, where the instructions state a torque but no tightening sequence for the four bolts. [Query to the author: inadequate is not defined anywhere in the report. Do you intend the opinion to be limited to the absence of a tightening sequence, or wider than that?]

What changed, and why

WasNowReason
7.1 The bracket failed in fatigue.7.1 The bracket failed in fatigue. Basis: the fracture surface observations at Section 4.2, read against the fatigue morphology at Section 3.1.The opinion was already supported four pages earlier and the conclusions section did not say so. Two section numbers carried across from the extract save the reader from hunting for them.
7.2 The failure was caused by improper installation.7.2 The failure was caused by improper installation. Basis: the as-found torque of 31 foot-pounds at Section 4.5, against the 55 foot-pounds specified in the instructions at Section 6.2.A one-sentence conclusion with nothing on the page beneath it. The opinion is unchanged, word for word. The two figures are the two figures already recorded at Sections 4.5 and 6.2.
7.3 Had the bracket been installed correctly, the incident would not have occurred.7.3 Had the bracket been installed correctly, the incident would not have occurred. Basis: the model at Section 5.3, run at 55 foot-pounds, predicts a stress range of 14 ksi against the endurance limit of 18 ksi at Section 5.1.The opinion is unchanged. What was missing was the sentence saying which analysis it rests on, and both numbers appear in the extract.
It is my opinion to a reasonable degree of engineering certainty thatIt is my opinion thatThe certainty formula appears nowhere in Sections 3 through 6, and nothing in the report says what would make it true or false. Removing it leaves the opinion and drops a phrase the report does not support.
the manufacturer's instructions were inadequate.the manufacturer's instructions were inadequate. Basis: Section 6.2, where the instructions state a torque but no tightening sequence for the four bolts. [Query to the author: inadequate is not defined anywhere in the report. Do you intend the opinion to be limited to the absence of a tightening sequence, or wider than that?]Inadequate is undefined, and how wide the opinion runs is the engineer's judgment. The editor supplies the cross-reference the report already earned and raises the definition as a question.

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