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The dispute resolution clause is usually the last thing drafted and the first thing litigated. It goes in at the end of a negotiation, when the commercial terms are settled and everyone wants the contract signed, and it is written quickly because nobody expects to need it. Two years later it is the only clause anyone reads, and the argument is not about the goods or the money. It is about whether this dispute is one the clause covers.

Arbitration agreements and the clauses inside commercial contracts come to us most often. Mediation briefs and position statements arrive alongside them, together with settlement agreements and terms of settlement. We also edit procedural orders, submissions on jurisdiction, statements of claim and defense in arbitration, and draft awards.

The Federal Arbitration Act makes a written arbitration provision "valid, irrevocable, and enforceable, save upon such grounds as exist at law or in equity for the revocation of any contract."1 That sentence puts an unusual weight on the drafting. The agreement is not evidence that the parties chose arbitration; it is the thing that sends them there, and its scope is decided by reading it. A clause covering disputes "arising out of" a contract and a clause covering disputes "arising out of or relating to" a contract are not the same clause, and the difference is one preposition. Which of the two the parties intended is a question for counsel. Whether the document says the one they chose, consistently, in every place it is mentioned, is a question about the writing.

Consistency across the file is the harder half. A dispute resolution clause is rarely written once. It is copied from a precedent, amended in a schedule, referred to in a side letter, and echoed in a settlement agreement drawn up years later. Each of those documents names the rules, the seat, the number of arbitrators and the language. When a draft is revised in pieces, the clause in the main agreement says three arbitrators and the schedule says one, or the body names an institution the notice provision does not. Neither version is wrong on its own. Read together they describe two different procedures, and the party who wants delay has a preliminary issue to argue before the merits are reached.

Awards carry a different kind of exposure. Under 9 U.S.C. 10 a court may vacate an award "where the arbitrators exceeded their powers, or so imperfectly executed them that a mutual, final, and definite award upon the subject matter submitted was not made."2 The same section lists corruption, evident partiality, and refusal to hear pertinent evidence.2 Whether a tribunal exceeded its powers is a matter for the court. What a draft award can do is show, on its face, what was submitted, what was decided, and that the second follows from the first: every head of claim in the submission addressed or expressly reserved, every figure in the reasoning matching the figure in the dispositive section, and no relief granted that no party requested. Where a draft resolves a point the parties did not put in issue, we raise it rather than smooth it over.

Mediation documents are written to be read once, by someone with a full docket, on the morning of the session. Some of them sit inside a court process rather than beside one: 28 U.S.C. 652 requires each federal district court to authorize the use of alternative dispute resolution in all civil actions and to devise its own ADR program by local rule.3 A brief written for a court-annexed mediation and a brief written for a private one answer to different rules about what may be said and to whom. A brief that buries the actual obstacle to settlement on page nine has failed at the only thing it was for. The material almost always contains the obstacle in a single sentence somewhere; the work is finding it and putting it where it will be read. Confidentiality regimes also differ between documents in the same file, and the difference matters. Rule 408 of the Federal Rules of Evidence makes evidence of "furnishing, promising, or offering ... a valuable consideration in compromising or attempting to compromise the claim" inadmissible to prove or disprove the validity or amount of a disputed claim.4 Documents drafted under that rule, documents drafted under an institution's confidentiality provisions, and documents drafted under a private confidentiality agreement are not interchangeable, and a passage moved from a mediation brief into a pleading can carry the wrong protection with it. Whether it may be moved is counsel's call. Flagging that it has been is ours.

Settlement agreements fail on their defined terms more often than on their substance. The release names the parties, and the parties are named again in the recitals, and the two lists are not identical. Affiliates are included in one clause and undefined elsewhere. A carve-out refers to a schedule that was renumbered. None of these change what the parties agreed. All of them give a later reader something to argue about, and a settlement agreement exists precisely to stop later argument.

We do not advise on any of it. Whether a clause is enforceable, whether a dispute falls inside it, whether a settlement figure is reasonable, whether an award is vulnerable, and whether a document may be shared are legal questions belonging to counsel and to the parties, and they reach us already decided. We do not widen or narrow a clause, add a party to a release, or resolve a conflict between two drafts by choosing one. Where two documents in the same file say different things, both versions come back with the difference set out, and the drafter decides which one is right.

Everything sent to us is confidential, including without-prejudice material, draft awards, and settlement terms that have not been executed.

References

  1. Cornell Law School, Legal Information Institute, 9 U.S.C. 2, Validity, irrevocability, and enforcement of agreements to arbitrate, Federal Arbitration Act. https://www.law.cornell.edu/uscode/text/9/2
  2. Cornell Law School, Legal Information Institute, 9 U.S.C. 10, Same; vacation; grounds; rehearing. https://www.law.cornell.edu/uscode/text/9/10
  3. Cornell Law School, Legal Information Institute, 28 U.S.C. 652, Jurisdiction, alternative dispute resolution in United States district courts. https://www.law.cornell.edu/uscode/text/28/652
  4. Cornell Law School, Legal Information Institute, Federal Rules of Evidence, Rule 408, Compromise Offers and Negotiations. https://www.law.cornell.edu/rules/fre/rule_408

A worked example: Dispute Resolution Clause

Commercial agreement, dispute resolution clause

A dispute resolution clause decides where a dispute is heard, and 9 U.S.C. 2 makes the written provision the thing that sends the parties to arbitration rather than evidence that they agreed to go. Its scope, seat, rules and tribunal are read off the page. The clause below was drafted from a precedent and then amended in a schedule, which is the ordinary way these come apart: each document is defensible alone, and read together they describe two different procedures. Nothing here concerns whether arbitration was the right choice, whether the clause is enforceable, or whether a particular dispute falls inside it. Those are counsel's, and the record below shows them already settled. Every term in the revision is taken from that record. Where the two documents disagree, the disagreement is put to the drafter rather than resolved by the editor.

Before

SPECIMEN, PREPARED BY EDITFAST FOR ILLUSTRATION. NOT A REAL AGREEMENT.
Ravensworth Components Ltd and Calder Marine Systems (both fictitious), supply agreement.

EXTRACT FROM THE INSTRUCTING RECORD (reproduced unchanged in both panels)
IR-1 The parties agreed arbitration, seated in New York, under the Commercial Arbitration Rules of the American Arbitration Association.
IR-2 The parties agreed a sole arbitrator. The figure of three appeared in the precedent the clause was copied from and was never discussed.
IR-3 The parties agreed the clause covers disputes arising out of or relating to the agreement, including its formation and termination.
IR-4 Schedule 4, added in the third draft, states that disputes under the agreement are subject to the exclusive jurisdiction of the courts of New York.
IR-5 Counsel confirms Schedule 4 was copied from an unrelated distribution agreement and has not been reviewed against clause 18.
IR-6 The governing law of the contract is the law of the State of New York. This is stated in clause 2 and is not in dispute.
IR-7 The parties agreed the language of the arbitration is English.
IR-8 Counsel has settled that the dispute resolution method is arbitration. The editor is not asked to advise on that or on enforceability.

18. DISPUTE RESOLUTION

18.1 Any dispute arising out of this Agreement shall be finally settled by arbitration in accordance with the rules of the American Arbitration Association, which rules are deemed to be incorporated by reference into this clause. The arbitration shall be conducted by three (3) arbitrators appointed in accordance with the said rules. The seat of the arbitration shall be New York. The governing law shall be as set out elsewhere in this Agreement.

After

SPECIMEN, PREPARED BY EDITFAST FOR ILLUSTRATION. NOT A REAL AGREEMENT.
Ravensworth Components Ltd and Calder Marine Systems (both fictitious), supply agreement.

EXTRACT FROM THE INSTRUCTING RECORD (reproduced unchanged in both panels)
IR-1 The parties agreed arbitration, seated in New York, under the Commercial Arbitration Rules of the American Arbitration Association.
IR-2 The parties agreed a sole arbitrator. The figure of three appeared in the precedent the clause was copied from and was never discussed.
IR-3 The parties agreed the clause covers disputes arising out of or relating to the agreement, including its formation and termination.
IR-4 Schedule 4, added in the third draft, states that disputes under the agreement are subject to the exclusive jurisdiction of the courts of New York.
IR-5 Counsel confirms Schedule 4 was copied from an unrelated distribution agreement and has not been reviewed against clause 18.
IR-6 The governing law of the contract is the law of the State of New York. This is stated in clause 2 and is not in dispute.
IR-7 The parties agreed the language of the arbitration is English.
IR-8 Counsel has settled that the dispute resolution method is arbitration. The editor is not asked to advise on that or on enforceability.

18. DISPUTE RESOLUTION

18.1 Any dispute arising out of or relating to this Agreement, including any question about its formation or termination, shall be finally settled by arbitration under the Commercial Arbitration Rules of the American Arbitration Association.

18.2 The arbitration shall be conducted by one arbitrator, appointed in accordance with those Rules.

18.3 The seat of the arbitration shall be New York, and the language of the arbitration shall be English.

18.4 This clause is governed by the law of the State of New York, as provided in clause 2.

[Query to counsel: Schedule 4 provides that disputes under this Agreement are subject to the exclusive jurisdiction of the courts of New York, which cannot stand alongside clause 18.1. IR-5 records Schedule 4 as copied from an unrelated agreement and not yet reviewed against this clause. We have not altered Schedule 4 and have not added a carve-out to clause 18. Which of the two is to govern is yours to settle.]

What changed, and why

WasNowReason
Any dispute arising out of this AgreementAny dispute arising out of or relating to this Agreement, including any question about its formation or terminationIR-3 records the agreed scope. Arising out of and arising out of or relating to are read as different in width, and the narrower form was what the precedent said rather than what the parties chose. Formation and termination are named because IR-3 names them.
three (3) arbitratorsone arbitratorIR-2 records a sole arbitrator, and records the figure of three as inherited from the precedent and never discussed. A clause naming three when the parties agreed one is a dispute about the tribunal before any dispute about the contract.
in accordance with the rules of the American Arbitration Associationunder the Commercial Arbitration Rules of the American Arbitration AssociationIR-1 names a specific rule set. The institution publishes several, and naming the body without the rules leaves which of them applies to be argued.
which rules are deemed to be incorporated by reference into this clause(removed)The rules apply because the clause selects them. The phrase adds a second, differently worded route to the same result, and two formulations of one thing invite an argument that they differ.
The governing law shall be as set out elsewhere in this Agreement.This clause is governed by the law of the State of New York, as provided in clause 2.Elsewhere is not a cross-reference a reader can follow. IR-6 records the governing law and the clause number, both already in the document.
(one paragraph carrying four separate provisions)18.1 to 18.4Scope, tribunal, seat and language were run together in a single block. Separating them is presentational and changes nothing, but it lets a later document refer to one of them by number instead of to the whole clause.
(silence on the language)the language of the arbitration shall be EnglishIR-7 records it. The clause did not say it, and the seat does not settle it.
(Schedule 4 conflict unaddressed)[Query to counsel: ...]Schedule 4 and clause 18 cannot both operate. IR-5 records the schedule as unreviewed against this clause, and IR-8 records the method as counsel's decision, so the conflict is set out and neither document is changed.

Specimen prepared by EditFast for illustration only. Not a real document, record or filing. Any resemblance to an actual organization, person or record is unintended. Not legal, regulatory, clinical or professional advice.

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